Jumat, 04 November 2011

RECOUNT TEXT (EXPERIENCE)

To Stefan William
My brother
             Hello Stefan, how are you ? I in here always fine. In this my letter, I want to tell you about experience last years.Hello Stefan, how are you ? I in here always fine. In this my letter, I want to tell you about experience last years.Before the second semester done, me and my friends OUT BOND to Pasruh Jambe, precisely in Agro Wisata Royal Family in Senduro. Before leaving we gathered at the school. Once all gathered, we were off. We use ELF to go to the destination. I'm an ELF with the principal, namely Bu Ninis. The road we traveled too uphill and winding. We were all tense. But we lost tensions reached their destination.
          The first time we arrived at our destination, our photo together. Once we got a photo with the direction of the guide's brothers there. Then we play games, sap sip-sup. Finally a game-sip sap-finished soup. We were all divided into 8 groups. 4 groups participated Kak Mince and Kak Doni, and four others joined the group and Kak Selly Kak Tia. Me and my group joined Kak Mince and Doni. The first game that we play first time around Agro Wisata Royal Family is a game of "Elephant Cow".The next game is "paralon Bolong" continue playing "Securing the Bomb". We tested compactness with closed eyes and then putting water into the bomb. But this in this game nothing works because the time is up. The last group game is "Spider Net".
           After finished group play, we all play "Flying Fox". Flying Fox I played twice. I can tickets from Mr. Rozi and Mrs. Lely. But a ticket from Lely Mom I love to Rintan. After playing the Flying Fox I played "Boats Donat". It's nice, because it can be played directly on the river. After playing Boat Doughnuts me and my friends swimming. Time has passed, we were required to go home.Actually, me and my friends wanted to go home yet, but we are aware. Before going home we took more photos with friends.After we take pictures home. And say goodbye to brother-sister guide. Although very brief, but I will not forget this OUT BOND.
           That all my experience that I can tell you. How about you? Please tell me about your experience

Your sister


Eka Dini Yuli W.

1 Comment:

  1. tus said...
    your letter is very complete but there 're still some verbs must be changed into past form.For example "Then we play games"
    play -> played
    You get 85

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